Thesis Statement

Thesis Statement
Read the following topic and write a thesis statement for developing a five-paragraph essay.

Topic: The following appeared in the opinion column of a financial magazine. “On average, middle-aged consumers devote 39 percent of their retail expenditure to department store products and services, while for younger consumers the average is only 25 percent. Since the number of middle-aged people will increase dramatically within the next decade, department stores can expect retail sales to increase significantly during that period. Furthermore, to take advantage of the trend, these stores should begin to replace some of those products intended to advantage of the trend, these stores should begin to replace some of those products intended to attract the younger consumer with products intended to attract the middle-aged consumer.”


Thesis Statement:
Department store is a good shopping place but products are somehow expensive, prime cost is higher and fewer foodstuffs.

Summary of a Full Box of Kisses

Summary of a Full Box of Kisses

Some time ago a man was angry and punished his three-year-old daughter for wasting due to decorate a gift box. Next morning the girl give the gift to her father but he angry again when he saw nothing in this box. He scolds the girl but the girl said to her father with tears that it is full of kisses in the box. Then the father realized everything. Some said when he discouraged; he opened the box and imagined the kisses the girl had put in there. After all, every human has a precious container filled with many love and kisses around us.

Summary of the Graduation Present

Summary of the Graduation Present
A young man was getting ready to graduate from college and told his father he wanted a sports car. He was expecting this present. However, his father gave him a bible. The young man was very angry about this present and left the house. Many years passed, he thought maybe it was the time to consider his father. Tragically, a call telling him his father had die and all of things belongs the young man now. After back his father’s house, he arranged things and saw the bible. He read carefully which his father underlined and sudden sadness and regret filled his heart. The car key dropped out from the bible which he had desired.

Paraphrasing and Summarizing

Fearless Public Speaking

Fearless and dislike may make students feel anxiety to standing in front of audiences. Cooperative games of fearless public speaking give three perfect games to help them overcome fear. For the purpose of those games, they will have a conscious of being belonging because of cooperation. The three games are “I like neighbors who…”, “Birthday line”, and “who likes what?” By those activities, students could get to know each other quickly and have opportunities to speak.

My Winter Vacation-Final

My Winter Vacation

Our final exam was finally done and our happy winter vacation is coming. Of all the holidays I like the winter vacation the most because it consists of Chinese New Year and the weather is cool.

In this winter vacation, I neither had a part time job nor went out to play. I usually stayed home, helped my mother with some housework, read some books, and watched TV. Except for these daily routine, there was a special and unforgettble thing in my vacation.

One day I felt boring in my home. My younger sister, brother and I went out with our dog which name is pi pi. We rode a motorcycle but pi pi ran on foot. At the beginning, we just wanted to make pi pi take more exercise so we let him run all the way. Afterward he jumped to my motorcycle and stopped running. We did not think too much at that time. We thought maybe he was tired. After we came back home, we were aware of that pi pi’s forefoot was injured. No wonder he did not want to run but we did not discover. We let him run all the time. What a poor dog it was. Now Pi Pi has recovered from the wound.

On this Chinese New Year we ate family reunion dinner in the eve of Chinese New Year and I got many red envelopes. I also went to Taipei Zoo and Ba-Gua Shan with my family and my boyfriend. W has not gone out together for a long time. Therefore, I was very delighted.The happy winter vacation is ended up with Chinese New Year. Although the vacation is short, I feel very good. Maybe my winter vacation sometimes is not interesting but I am leading an easy life.

TV program-The Apprentice-Final

TV program- The Apprentice

There are many different TV programs nowadays. One of the programs I like most is “The Apprentice.” This program contains many professional areas and items such as marketing strategies which worth seeing.

Through this TV program which was made by Mr. Trump. We could also see both the ugly and beautiful part of human being. We not only observed the candidates accomplish every task but also saw the losers how to defend themselves in the board room. This program generally shows the reality of the society. You have to think about what is the main goal of every task. In the competing process, no matter how awful you did or how bad your interpersonal relationship was, once you won the task, nobody would care about your mistakes. On the other hand, your mistakes would be magnified and attacked by your partners if you failed.

Everyone has his professional skills and sometimes you have to trust your team members. Everyone works together on a project and does their own different jobs in the same time. It is called an effective team work. When you express your own opinions, don’t forget to listen to others. In my opinion, The Apprentice attracts many people because it represents the American Dream. Everyone has chances to succeed if they have abilities.

Interpretation of Data

Table 36 shows the number of the change of vocational students in Taiwan. From this table it can be seen that there are forty-two students in first semester flunked out but only 12 students in second semester. It shows students who transfer to other schools in first semester are eleven people and there was a steady rise to twenty-one students in second semester. The main reason leads to the situation probably be that they need more students. Although death occupied least place in first semester, it was reported increase slightly in second semester.

writing assighment-The Apprentice

TV program- The Apprentice

There are many different TV programs nowadays. One of the programs I like most is “The Apprentice.” This program contains many professional areas and items such as marketing strategies and creates which worth seeing.

Through this TV program which was made by Mr. Trump. We could also see both the ugly and beauty part of human being. We not only observed the candidates accomplish every task but also see the losers how to defend themselves in the board room. This program generally shows the reality of the society. You have to think about what is the main goal of every task. In the competing process, no matter how awful you have done or how bad your interpersonal relationship was, once you win the task, nobody care about you. On the other hand, your mistakes will be magnified and attacked by your partners if you lose.

Everyone has his professional skills and sometimes you have to trust your team members. Everyone works together on a project but to do different things in the same time. It is called an effective team work. When you express your own opinions, don’t forget to listen to others. In my opinion, The Apprentice attracts many people because it represents American Dream. Everyone has chances to succeed if we have abilities.

writing assighment-The Apprentice

Thoughts about The Apprentice

There are many different TV programs nowadays. One of the programs I like most is “The Apprentice.” This program contains many professional areas and items such as marketing strategies and creates stimulating which worth us to learn.

Through this TV program which was made by Mr. Trump. We could also see both the ugly and beauty part of human being. We not only observed the candidates how to accomplished every tasks but also seen the lose team to defend themselves in the board room. This program generally shows the reality of the society. Every task you have to think about what the main goal and core is. In the process, no matters how awful you have done or how bad your interpersonal relationship was. Once you won the task, nobody remembered. On the other hand, your false will be magnified and attacked by your partners if you lose.

Everyone has his professionals skills and sometimes you have to trust your team members. Everyone work together on a project but doing different things in the same time. It is called an effective team work. When you express your won opinions, don’t forget to listen to others. In my opinion, The Apprentice attracts many people because it represents American Dream. Everyone has chances to success if you have abilities.

Qualification-2

Last year all overseas students completed University Registration forms. There were most students filled out University Library Membership Application form. The majority of them completed National Health Service Registration form. However, a little International Student Identity Card Application was filled out by overseas students. In addition, it was quiet certainly that minority of overseas student finished Accommodation Office Application form. There were a few students completed Magazine Subscription form.

Combined Qualifications-2

1. Attractive people have more favorable personal attributes than unattractive people
==> Attractive people may have more favorable personal attributes than unattractive people.

2. Economic sanctions are ineffective.
==> In some circumstances, economic sanctions are ineffective.

3. Alcohol causes people to become violent.
==> According to the studies, alcohols tend to make people to become violent.

4. Passive smoking causes cancer.
==> Passive smoking attributes to certain types of cancer.

5. Recycling is the best solution to the waste disposal problem.
==> In the circumstances of eco-awareness, recycling may be a good solution to the waste disposal problem.

6. Physical exercise prevents depression.
==> It is widely accepted that physical exercise could reduce depression.

7. Deep tunnels are safer and less vulnerable to earthquake shaking than are shallow tunnels.
==> It is now generally recognized that deep tunnels are safer and may less vulnerable to earthquake shaking than are shallow tunnels.

8. Private schools provide a better education than do public schools.
==> It seems that private schools could provide a better education than do public schools.

Combined Qualifications

1. Attractive people have more favorable personal attributes than unattractive people.
==> Attractive people may have more favorable personal attributes than unattractive people.

2. Economic sanctions are ineffective.
==> In some circumstances, economic sanctions are ineffective.

3. Alcohol causes people to become violent.
==> According to the studies, alcohols tend to make people to become violent.

4. Passive smoking causes cancer.
==> Certain types of cancer, passive smoking lead to cancer.

5. Recycling is the best solution to the waste disposal problem.
==> n the circumstances of eco-awareness, recycling may be a good solution to the waste disposal problem.

6. Physical exercise prevents depression.
==> It is widely accepted that physical exercise prevents depression.

7. Deep tunnels are safer and less vulnerable to earthquake shaking than are shallow tunnels.
==> It is now generally recognized that deep tunnels are safer and may less vulnerable to earthquake shaking than are shallow tunnels.

8. Private schools provide a better education than do public schools.
==>It seems that private schools could often provide a better education than do public schools.